Reporting from theatre
Hello my name is k.3.G./\./\/ im visiting a school on planet earth observing the humans im seeing how they do theatre I see they plan out many skits and stuff they seem to be many ideas being tossed around ive taken the form as a grade 8 child so I don't stand out its very interesting to see the students doing all this moving and planning just like on my planet I think ill keep the form of this human and join this club.
The Fab 5
Hey Kegan,
ReplyDeleteI didn't know there was a theater club! I really enjoyed reading your post, even though it was brief it was interesting to know what happens in drama club. For next time I'd really like to read more so maybe you could write a little more. Also just a little reminder; you wrote im so don't forget to capitalize your 'I' and add the " ' ". Same goes for 'ill' and 'ive'. Good job on your first post I can't wait to read your next post!
thanks and next time it will be longer
DeleteHi Kegan
ReplyDeleteI like your writing!I like how you used alot of Alien writing like how your name is weird and u said u are on planet earth observing humans. It was very brief and i think you could of explained alot more about the club.
For example i dont really know what the club is about and what they do etc.
But it was still a good writing. I think you did #2
This comment was by Kaylee
Hi Kegan,
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed your creative "alien" touches that add interest to your style of writing. However, try to remember to write in ms word and use spell check and grammar check before you copy and paste it over to your blog. WHy? Our blog writing is still to work on your formal writing skills and the ms word program would have helped to remind you that your post is all one run-on sentence as well as point out the spelling errors Kaylee and Maiya mentioned. I am glad you mentioned that you agree with Maiya about needing to work on expanding in your writing. For a first post, you have made a good start. Looking forward to more of your creative flair coming out in your writing this year. I am glad to hear that you have decided to join theatre company. I think you will enjoy it! Bring a friend next time maybe.